yo balla and oktave av been helpin wid MY flow nd dis wot ive cum up wid tell me what u fink
MC’S CANT KEEP UP WID MY PACE I OUTLAST EM//
LIKE ROAD RUNNER I KEEP RUNNIN STRAIGHT PAST EM//
HANDS ON THE TRIGGER KILL A FIGURE AS I BLAST EM//
BLOW U TO -BITS- TO -PIECES- MAKE YOUR LIVER -SPLIT- DIS JUST -INCREASES-//
IL SEPARATE YA HEAD FROM YA SPINE//
SO DON’T WINE, SIT BACK ND LISTEN 2 MY FLOW GO 2 DA BEAT IN TIME//
GETTING VEX AS U SEE MY FAME SHINE,EVRYLINE,EVRY RYHME
WANNA BE DIS GOOD, YA MISUNDERSTOOD,COZ U KNO DESE BARZ ARE MYNE//
AND U KNO DAT CLASHIN ME IS LIKE COMMITIN DA CRIME//
SO AS I DUMP DIS VERSE, U SHD B BACKING UP AWAY IN REVERSE//
yo dis is gd ur flow is gettin better im likin it now u gtta work on your structure of your barz.
so stop doin 3 line word rymin schemes they dont suit make sure u have 4 rymin words in 4 lines at least cz it makes your flow sound better aswell need n e more help jus ask bro!
~I slew these newbies who are tryin too be~
~a true G but aint shit compared too me~