yo all da lyrical pros out dere..i need sum help wid makin lyrics if u dnt mind...i started a few but cant carryon so if n e 1 wanna help den please post ur bars..im new to makin lyrics so my lyrics are shit if u no wot i mean...here i come...please adjust if u want n add some more bars to it...

hey yo dis is big moh,
im a ninja gonna com on your door,
punch u on your face n u'll b on da floor,
wen u wake up destination u will not know,
so if u dont wana get mugged den jus go on da flow,
wen bigmoh's on da mic doin his show,
all u wastemanz keep ur heads on the low,
or i'll have to merk u 1 by 1 or maybe in a row,
i aint gonna waste my time callin u a bro,
coz im not an m.c but a lyrical pro,

reyt mate i'm new to the grime scene and stuff and lyric makin
first off i know some geezers at skew who mc and stuff
so i hung with them for a month

some pointers;

rhyme your bars in 4s or 8s(if you can)
U do 16 Barz for mc'in never any other number unless it is the tournement rules
Try to include as many personal hits as you can (mention for e.g how fat their mum is)
OVERCOME THEM AND HUMILIATE THEM

now to improve yours

yo, big moh, And ee is rollin.
im a ninja gonna com on your door,
punch u on your face n u'll b on da floor,
i take this as a hobby not a chore,
all of my fans just beg me for more,
if u wanna clash u will not score,
i know your mum is a dirty whore,
your bars are so lame they dont even rhyme in four,
cos this lyrical dog is gonna roar,
u wanna merk me then come and throw
u get hit so hard u will not know,
so if u dont wana get merked den go on da flow,
wen i'm on da mic doin my show,
all u wastemanz keep ur heads on the low,
or i'll have to merk u in 1s or in a row,
i aint gonna waste time cos your too slow,
coz im not an m.c but a lyrical pro,

yo yo yo....safe BADMANC-J...safe 4 da advide...

anyone else out dere dat help me wid my lyrics...

Big took u some time to reply meanwile i've been elevating

the bars i wrote for u aint exactly decent standard

i'll give you a key and some cool rhyme schemes to make ya verses dope.

the rhyme scheme at the moment is like

TTTTTTA
TTTTTTA
TTTTTTA
TTTTTTA

to make it bit better add 2 syllables

TTTTTTTTTT AB
TTTTTTTTTT AB
TTTTTTTTTT AB
TTTTTTTTTT AB

ie... i fit the amazing niche greater, cause im a sick dominator
if you dont like me, then fuck you im sick of these bitch haters

thats an TTTABTTTAB
TTTTTTTAB

rhyme scheme, just need to think of a phrase for the end of a sentence, ie cool kid.... then think of a rhyme for school and a rhyme for kid, and they needa make sense, ie... cool / school /fool/ jewel, good, then rhymes for kid / did, shit, this/ bid

and then put that in a sentence, which makes sense

yo im a cool kid, never did what fools did
call me the teacher, cause im taking you to school bitch

multis and a simple play

once you get multis down.... you can work on internal rhymes

ie ..... A A B
C C B

.. im sick of this dick, hes a bitch
im bright like a light, and he's just shit ( very simple ino lol)

and then transistional rhymes ( rhyming lines then using the end rhyme of the first two as a starting rhyme in the first part of the next sentence)

ie A A B
C C B
B......D

im sick with hits and he aint great
cause i kill for tha thrill, not for hate
youll meet your fate, if you wanna test me....

see if that helps you

okay basically yu can chat wid battle n dat
but usin bars bout ur mum is a bit wak, u get me..
got get sum real barz or else manz fink ur fake nd dat
take time and get more complex wid rhymin in dat
listen to other professionals like jme, skepta, wiley
u know...