not feelin da 1st 4 stillz

dats aight man, each t der own ye. thx 4 da feed bk

yo sup ppl long time.... getting bang on the barz agen... beatboxing can only go to far ... ya get me

but first fings first frisk aka skip NEVER bite a dizze track EVER agen...

2nd spit you laid down .. is creeper by dizzee rascal
and you know thats the big no for all mc's

now im gnna hit on this

Frisk must be dizzee biting barz off rascal//
This arse hole dont wanna feel the "shots" i got in my "arsenal"//*
and Im sure i pass-em-all, call me your A-Grade student,//
cause for days i slay stray mc's and make em look stupid//

Radikulus you want feed back?, dont ask frisk aka skip//
cz this prick is the type of dick whos ganna nick ya shit for his next script//
just cz this boys lyrics are truely flat man//
hes biting more shit than the original pacman//

like elmer said "be very quiet" cz im hunting shit//**
and frisk aka skip is the next cunt on list//
So boy start writing stop biting and making MC's rhymes be waste//
start typing and rhyming instead of smacking the buttons "copy and paste"//

12 barz... am i in?
* double meaning... shots as in firing from arsenal.. weapons and football team
**Elmer as in elmer fudd.. the bald headed man who hunts bugs bunny all the time

~I slew these newbies who are tryin too be~
~a true G but aint shit compared too me~



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 11/02/07 01:52PM by oktave - msk.

hahaa nice 1 oktave. like th double meanings n shit. x

radikulus
ur bars were dope in a good way

welcome

oktave

u do u,
ill do me,
im a mad man lyrical mc,
derz no lot of tingz i cant b,
got a lot of haterz hatin on me,
but i don watch dem it don phase me,

im gona slew u now,
slew u now make ur boiz say wow,
donno wat u tlkin u clown,
chat air in face i put u down,
ill slew waste ma lyk u 4 less dan a pound,
slew me how,
u beta stand ur ground,
not gonna say much ill catch u around,
onli online no need 2 frown

u clown

Thx CJ,
so am i in then? lol.

Im sure me n frisk cn put r shit behind us :P


*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

nw then haha. i dnt kno wot this is abwt bt woteva.

YO!
run, come, follow n chek 4 da flow/
im lettin it go//
get wrecked frm ya hed to ya toe/
mate turn it up! i dont give a fuk if ya speakers blow//
ur weak a neek u need to know/
im deep on a beat il defeat u bro//
put man to sleep wen i speak n il keep n continue to grow/
rip n reap ya sinew mek ya bleed frm ya nose//
ya no say my manor man r sweet wi da frees n da prose/
beatin heaps of eej who oppose//
creep n weave tru da bleak streets wi heat on a low//
u cant compete wi da pro/
ur too easy, im evil n greedy, ur greasy n slow//
i weed out da weak seeds n eat ps wiv my bumboclaart cereal!

sukyaself!




Edited 2 times. Last edit at 11/22/07 06:25PM by finite.

Ok so finite, nobody wants t follow,
U chattin alot of shit yeah ur threats seem hollow,
U go ahead reap ur seeds, ill sow sorrow,
On a beat u defeat? nah th title was borrowed,
from me coz lyrically im a savage,
Put pen to page n cause alot more damage,
Than u can do when u come thru,
Coz my rhymes are full whereas urs seem famished,
Look shithead, ive got a rep to uphold,
So when u roll in u best watch wht got sold,
Coz competing with a pro? tht lines kinda old,
Every man says the same yet they now lay cold,
like Coffins to graves i put words on a page,
each as sombre as the last bar that i laid,
Im th great, yeah u all know how i play,
So take ur bars star n just walk away.

Jst a quick 1 coz i gt bored lol


*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

ur a poom poom sucker
children fucker
brought from da gutter