Hey everybody, just decided to start a fresh post where everybody can do what Radikulus did with the 8 Mile beat and bars. State the instrumental then spit ur shit, it dont have to be 16 bars, but try not to go tooooo long, ya dig?

Anywayz, let me spark this off

BEAT: EMINEM N JAY Z - RENEGADE freestyle from 01 by yours truly

I am what my reciprical isnt, lyrically driven
livin hard, I keep my foes in peripheral vision
Stategize with synthetic division
Divide and conquer, sharp shooter, aim for the head with geometric precision
The simplest mathematics form the deadliest tactics
keep the enemy distracted, and then we attack
No traps, but if they run, hit em hard in their backs
Take out my pad, another squad to subtract
Then take it back to HarmCity, where we juggle the crack
Hussle it properly strapped, cause niggas dyin over muscle and property
Cartels tryna build up monopolies
Niggas fightin to be commander in chief, screamin fuck a democracy
Livin with dispositions, so they corner philosophy
Given a premonition, I was born with a prophecy
Of poverty and robbery and ongoin rivalries
Rape, murder, and fraud, suicide, all atrocities
Animosity, man whose stoppin me, probably none
Angry and young, so I'm proud to be from
The ghetto, the gutter, the back of the projects, the slums
It's from the hood, and the projects we come
From the hood so we gotta be dumb, they poison us
With the products, narcotics, if it aint drugs, then it's gotta be guns
Breakin the laws, so we're bound to get hung
Hit us with STD's cant get us all, so they gotta kill some
How can a man be proud of his son, if he never knew him
We dont stay with our women, all we do is just screw em
Chickens we use em, ditch em and lose em, trick and elude em
Need to pay more attention to the kids we're confusin
Mentally bruisin, they grow up to be simple and stupid
So they're twisted in the end and got a gift but cant use it
And the enemy just thinks it's amusin
How they got us all livin this fast life, when we need to be cruisin
Thinkin we're snoozin, cause history is filled with illusions
Life is choices, you're just livin and choosin
Make a decision, if it aint right it's wrong, you need to get with the movement
What I spit is more than lyrics and music,
cause I live it and prove it ,admit um the truest,
Gangsta to the core, but I know I got a mind and wasn't meant to abuse it
So my rhymes and my lyrics are fluent, but dont make me misuse em
it's my time, if you aint wit it you losin

.....that's me about 7 years ago...the original me, when all I rapped about was the bullshit that's goin on in the streets of america. I havent lost that essence, but I'm more versatile now. I dont think I'd make it mainstream if I only rapped that realistically all the time ya know...gimme some feedback...

here's something more recent

BEAT: COMMON - AQUARIUS(sorry...but I'm a pisces so the title holds no signicance LMAO)

I met Poverty at a young age
and the same time, I met Hope, who told me I would be somethin one day
That's when I met Block, he introduced me to the dope game
That's how I met Crack, he was runnin with Cocaine
On the way to meet Greed til he got murdered by Charity
Charity was jealous cause he was fuckin Prosperity
Prosperity was freaky, but Charity was a hoe
She fucked the judge and the DA and them suckas let her go
At his funeral, would you believe? This bitch tried to talk to me
That's when I realized that her and Envy were stalkin me
Envy was a dime, but she fucked the whole hood
A few niggaz got burned, man that bitch was no good
But around me so much, my girl Love got jealous
Took forever to convince her that she was one of the fellas
But the very moment I got it, I betrayed that trust
Envy got my own niggas to introduce me to Lust
Right after I bust, I realized what happened
It got back to Love, and everything came crashin
Down, she changed her name to Hate, and started spazzin
Then calmed down once I mad amends for my actions
But Lust killed Love, she was jealous of the passion
Walked right up and cut her throat while I was smashin
I never thought I'd find another, til I met Rap
Told me she didn't mind the long nights in the trap
It was love at first sight, she knew how to pitch crack
Shorty even got along with my best friend Gat
Sort of a distraction, but she got me through the struggle
Through the knowledge that she gave me, I perfected my hustle
But her little brother Murder, man he always wanted more
Had this fiend named Death always knockin at my door
I was tired of seein War, but he lived right next door
He said he had beef, but we never found Peace
We searched every street, but we only found Grief
He put us on to Relief, but we found her deceased
Heard who got her murdered, so we ran up on Deceit
He pointed out the trigger man, but we never me Defeat
Neglected Rap the whole time, thinkin she would wait
Not until I went back, did I notice my mistake
I'll never forget that look on her face
She had a husband named Life, and a baby named Faith
My heart was broken, so I started feelin sick
But the next day, I found out that Life was a bitch
The story wasnt real, and I was so blind
But Rap always made it difficult to read between the lines
That same day, I got a call around five
She said the house got shot up, and the baby girl died
I was ready to ride, til she pulled me to the side
Started cryin, and told me that the baby was mine's
Then she disappeared, dear God I went insane
After searchin for three years, I had to charge it to the game
But one chick stayed with me through the drama and the pain
And I cant remember her name, so I call her Mary Jane...

never finished it, I think it's pretty deep though...you just dont get lyrical content like this anymore...ehrrr..btw...I'm signed to MurdaNam/Street Commissioned Records...so dont try to steal my shit...trust and believe we run legit....

anywayz...gimme some feedback

Thts some immense wordplay Krakk. All th personifications definately make tht a track. truth!
Ive already dne a few drops on tht eminem/jay-z- renegade instrumental.
Its a manic tune. I fink im gna like this page haha x

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 01/03/08 09:53AM by Radikulus.

yea, I'm almost 4 years older than you Rad, but let me tell you...you already have a way with words, that I admire, especially knowing that you started off singing like I did. I used to sing, and play a whole bunch of instruments. I switch to percussion and drums, along with beat making in the 11th grade, and ended making 2nd chair All Nationals for percussion. People started going crazy offer my beats and Cadences. It was around that time, that 2 of my closes friends died...and they were my two favorite rappers from this label at the time...that was my inspiration to start rappin, because they always told me I needed to.

I'm tellin you the same thing...being able to sing makes your talent stronger. I have tracks that I'm singing on, that people will never know is me, just because I'm so gutter...people know who I am, and some of the "evil" things I've done growing up, and it often makes them forget my talented side...it gives you an advantage. And it allows you to make completely solo albums muahahahaha

BEAT: ROYCE DA 59 - HEARTBEAT(PROD. BY KANYE WEST) ()=sample on the beat

(this is the heart)
of a demon, a cutthroat, a heathen
you dont believe him, then put ya heart to the streets and
(listen to my heart beat)cause street commission's in the game
used to spit it from the brain but(this is the heart)

(heartbeating)

You a sweet nigga, you love your wife
and I'm a street nigga, I love my life
so given a chance, honestly, I may fuck your wife
but I'll be damned if I let you say fuck my life
while you're romancin, busy tryna touch your wife
um slingin hammers, cause haters tryna touch my life
Um cookin grams up, ya money aint doublin right
because you scammin, niggas aint husslin right
and the consequences are major, niggas fucked for life
it used to cost an arm and leg, but rebels up'd the price
So if deep down you pussy, and you love your life,
Dont come around me playin gangsta, cause I bust a dikes
Everybody got hater in em, so my trust aint right
Murda in my hallucinations, I dont trust my sight
and I owe it to the game so (this is the heart)

of a demon, a cutthroat, a heathen
you dont believe him, then put ya heart to the streets and
(listen to my heart beat)cause street commission's in the game
used to spit it from the brain but(this is the heart)

(heartbeats)

Life is but a dream, I live in a nightmare
but I refuse to show fear, what I look like scared?
if the cops aint on the scene, you can find me right there
in the middle of ya war, with a loaded 44
try to tell em before, you need me like air
cant breath? send a curse I recieve em like prayers
for everyone I ignore, that's another life spared
but should you die in ya sleep, ha!, see if I care
I aint nobody's God, um just playin my part
These tracks are my canvas, um just paintin my scars
Bringin like to the dark, so the rest of the world
Can feel the pain in my heart, the taint on my soul
No insane claims of the game changin or hyped goals
Only the slight chance that my label might blow
The lyrics get heard so the knowledge might flow

then the sample and hook blah blah blah...anywayz, I liked this track because it's the first time I actually sat down and wrote something out. I normally just record til I get it right, no pen, no pad, except for hooks sometimes. that's the reason the hook ends like "used to spit it from the brain but(this is the heart)

Wrote this now, jst a quick one tbh. Ill drop sme mre scripts soon ye. Safeee x

EMINEM FT DR DRE- IF I GET LOCKED UP TONIGHT

U an enemy to me but u just pretend to be,
Something true n so u try to stay of use to me,
U see the key to this game n u recognise the beef,
So u sticking to my side but u aint to ride tonight,
Homicide aint a mission its an necessary in your case,
ur face a waste of space thts too clear to witness,
Ur graves a deserted place n ur last screams is pitchless,
U speachless if u seek to destroy or beseech us,
Deaths obligatory so eat the dirt,
U fuck wit a crew like mine boy u bound to be hurt,
Sound of heaters n the freaks wit they gats,
Searching for ya squadron like its dogs vs cats,
I rap addictively a persona with direction,
Type of girl to make u stand up like u got an errection
Ur unexplainable actions r complex, i cant grasp em,
Like why ud drop static on a mic instead of blastin em,
N why instead of shooting up bitch u start askin em,
To drop their arsons u an arse if u play me for dumb,
U aint to see the day u disrespect a girl with guns,
But u are the kind pussy always left upon they ones,
I leave u stunned like a gangster i get down n spastic,
Especially when Fags front they got the dope to drop to plastic,
U past it u placid, on a mic im like acid,
Ill eat away ur bars, rhymes life n ur assets,
Ur caskets get blown apart like ur names Napolean,
Only im the dynamite with a reputation as a hooligan,
I flare up but i cool again, bitch im jst ruling em,
Boys who think they wired but i fire up like petroleum.
So stagger on over place a wager with me,
Whts the bets in a week that u still own all ur teeth,
U cocky but ur plans disproportionate u aint figured,
That boy gets burnt when u play with a fire thts bigger..Than u,
So...the problem is what?
That at the end of this u fink ur the one to come out on top,
I fink not u stop there on rung one of this ladder,
Coz u n ur new crews weaker than a cystitis ridden bladder,
U gather ur force boy n ill come recruit more,
Aint no business of yours what these 38's are for,
U on war, u called, so i respond wit a roar,
U wanna bring the beef then come, cause ill serve it up raw causeee

''I wont get locked up tonight'' So im on to roll down tonight
U got the goods but u dont show no depth,
So roll thru this hood n ill show u death,

''See i wont get locked up tonight'' Coz my boys got my back tonight
Im a primordial queen just ready to step,
So come roll thru this hood n I'll show u death.











Edited 1 times. Last edit at 01/08/08 02:53PM by Radikulus.

Yes Krakk! i get wht u mean bout all the 'evil' things bit, ive kinda got th same deal, ive dne sme pretty messed up shit so ppl tend to overlook wht i do like its not real or summat. I do lay tracks bt nothin on my own, its mostly with a drum n bass artist i no called Leon 'Saliva', he makes th beats n i write lyrics 4 us bth to lay over em, or, jst general freestyle battling with friends n stuff, nowt big tho.

Same with th instrument bit aswell, Ive learnt a few myself, drums is best tho haha. Leon n my cousin r attempting t show me how to make beats properly coz tbh dnt no mch bout it but they not havin mch luck at min lol, ima keep tryin tho haha, thx for advice, i appreciate it.

Yes Ekza, Ceej, Kam! cnt 4get youse no can i :P stay kl all ye xxx



*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

I cant do much from this far away, except tell you that you have the talent to go somewhere with music. Dont be a stranger. I have a fresh branch of the label that is placed for me to build. It's called MurdaNam Records/Productions. It's fresh, nobody on it. It's also at mixtape stage, where I'm recruiting artists according to feedback from mixtape campaigns.

I wouldn't even take you through that process...I'd just sign you lol. Too much talent for a young lady ur age, then u have a look that can sell itself to the world...lmao...all I have to do is help you get to my level...ur close...just missing
some of the experience. Also probably need some help opening ur imagination.

Anywayz, dont be a stranger...kk?

Nahh wnt be a stranger mate, honest x

DMX- RUFF RIDERS ANTHEM

()= Sample

(STOP, DROP, SHUTTEM DOWN OPEN UP SHOP, OH, NO, THATS A RUFF RIDERS ROLL) X2

Dont act like u aint seen me coz i saw u playing spies,
Copped the glassy look thats glazed up both ur eyes,
Slightly inferior, u slightly on the roll,
Slightly ur interior's gonna be put on show,
Keep it on the low im a cannibal to all,
Fuck with me then best believe this animals gonna roar,
U peep where u go, with a torch n a mic,
Better watch where u tread coz dis bread is worth a fight,
U might squeeze a trigger but wheres the balls in that,
If u big to throw blows set ur fists up to smack,
U aint a big dog, u a jack russell man,
I got more teeth than dentists n i use em when i can,
Bitch with a bite, bitch with a bark,
Bitch with a lit fuse that sparks if u start,
Girl with a crew, u a boy on ur own,
So time to use ur own two n fucking run home, coz we,

(STOP, DROP, SHUTTEM DOWN OPEN UP SHOP, OH, NO, THATS A RUFF RIDERS ROLL) X2

We stop, drop, move n shut u down,
U a bad boy rider but whos bad now?
No place to hide out, we ransack all spots
Criminals to th death n we step none stop,
Ruff rider for life im a demon in my crew,
I stay face hunting so best watch wht u do,
Deceit in my eyes, plots ur demise,
So if u wanna bust lets just take this outside,
Im all about th hustle but if u want a war,
Im always on to rumble, always got my 44's,
Im bossing every day while u nothing in ur ways,
U a state, in this place, u have nothin but a grave
See a dogs gotta eat, n ur bloods wht i crave,
Im a hood cut bitch n the taste makes th chase,
Im revved up n waiting no debating in this game,
Whether u on it or not th outcomes jst the same, coz we

(STOP, DROP, SHUTTEM DOWN OPEN UP SHOP, OH, NO, THATS A RUFF RIDERS ROLL) X2


*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*



Edited 3 times. Last edit at 01/12/08 03:47PM by Radikulus.

DIS IS A TRACK DAT I DID A COUPLE WEEKZ AGO...

ROLLIN ON EDGE.... BTW I DUNNO BOUT ALL DAT SAMPLE SHIT OR WHATEVA LOL..

im rollin on edge
skenzkid yes im rollin on edge
might see me rollin wida headz
but u'll neva see me rollin widda widda
im rollin on edge
skenzkid yes im rollin on edge
might see me rollin wida headz
but u'll neva see me rollin wida lead

rollin on edge that is a yes yes
roll wid da lead dat is a no no
roll wid da headz dat is a yes yess
roll wid da lead fam dat is a no no

when im on edge know im goin on show show
get u freezin coz im cold like snow snow
when i spit barz minds get blow blow
get ready get set get ready go go

when im on edge im neva fallin
when i heard grime dat was my callin
know dat im flyin through da clouds so high
dat when i start flowin im soaring ....like....

im flowin on edge
skenzkid yes im flowing on edge
might see me flowin wid da headz
and i'll be flowin way after im dead

im rollin on edge
skenzkid yes im rollin on edge
might see me rollin wida headz
but u'll neva see me rollin widda widda
im rollin on edge
skenzkid yes im rollin on edge
might see me rollin wida headz
but u'll neva see me rollin wida lead

when im rollin on edge my mind just clicks
im goin on serious no games no tricks
ive got cleva barz and i got quik wits
so i dont need 2 chat bout rollin wid sticks

coz nuff manz chat like they rollin in the blitz
while i focus on the music dat flow through my lips
so dark dat i cud cause an eclipse
like blowin da flames out on candle wicks
.........................
finish it nxt time