Im no star, but im bright like Neon/
Ima mc, i dnt sing like Dion/
Blud u know u could neva take me on/
A resident evil and im cool like Leon/
Cnt even tell what level i be on/
But im nang wen i spit, buss up ur Lip/
Leave lotsa blood like a girl wen she on/
And its Real life, aint gotta ps3 on/
U dnt wanna start buld, cos ur bring me in/
Now that im pissed its back to MC'ing/
Come and test me and reds all im Seeing/
So wen im on the roads u better start Fleeing/
Im not scared, in my pants im not Peeing/
like shhuuu yaaa mut or ill bring the City in/
Mite get my cuz mite just bring a G in/
U dnt wanna watch me bring family in/
Edited 2 times. Last edit at 05/22/08 04:40PM by MCK.
Not bad, ur pretty grime so i get that th simplistic style works n can get pulled off when its on tracks, if thts ur way of spittin then stick to it, each to their own, but, when ur writing lyrics for people to read not hear, then u gotta get deeper inta what words look and sound like.
Its all bout experimenting n moving outta ur comfort zones, if u can do that then u progress to a whole new level as an artist.
U dnt have t, but it wont do ur lyrics any harm :P
Yeh I only do Grime really, can and use to do rap.
And yeh ur rite, does sound good when I spit it. Maybe its the fact that its impossible to picture how it would sound just by reading it, that makes it look dodgy.
I do wanna improve and safe for the advice, I like tryin alotta different things so hopefully I can improve in different ways.
Safe for advice
x
Here are some other barz I wrote for a song about livin in Walthamstow East London.
MCK
16 BARZ
LISTENED TO WILEY, LEARN ALOTTA THING
USE TO SPIT RAP BUT NOW I AINT BOTHERING
NOW I SPIT GRIMe, THE SCENE IM UNCOVERING
HIGHER UP NOW U MITE SEE ME HOVERING
MITE SEE ME ONNA TING, MANDEM HOLLARIN
WANNA START SHIT THEM IM GONNA START COLLARING
WEN I SPEAK WORDS, U BETTER START SWALLOWIN
U CALLED OUT MY NAME NOW BETTER START GROVELIN
GOT MY FAM WID ME NOW AN IM BLESSY
WEN I BRING JACK TO UR DOOR ITS MESSY
COUPLE OF SLAPS TO UR JAW DNT STRESS ME
I GET STRESSY, DNT TRY AN TEST ME
OR VEX ME, I KNOW THAT I MITE LOOK SEXY
BUT IM FLY BOY EATIN HATIN FOR BREAKKY
AND U CAN CHECK IT, OR CHECK ME
I DISH OUT SLAPS LIKE THAT GUY ON TEKKY
ok ill start dis clash ting off ye but i wanna hear sum hype lyrics ugm ?
im bowlin 4's like criket u ent big in dis game ur a midget
if i c ya mumz car ill knick it
if i see her pussyyyy dammmm ill like it
draw 4 da gun step bk den click it
take u out this game like im bowlin wickets
yo i might have bad teeth but thats wat happens when u get in beef
i bet if i step 2 u ull jump of da mic nd shake like a leave