i wanna start a new page like mc grime mandem if ugm

just write sum barzzz enit nd we all just have 1 big clash

blessss

top mc u no this man
yano this man coz i floored dis man
ull get baked like hovis man
dunt cum 2 ma bitz like yano this man
u dunt no this man
just understand
on the road im the coldest man
coldest man ill show this man
ill stick 2 ya head like tesco ham
nn8 streetz dats were i jam
i spit country not polish man
i spit new barz on road
urs sound kinda oldish man
man i got gurls
spit i barz on streetz

Ite then here is sumfing:

MCK
ME DUB
64 BARZ
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FIRST 16 BARZ RHYMING SOUND:[OH-OH]

Ima a white boy, But im dark like [Coco].
Blud M-C-K, yeh thats my [Logo]
Man spits [solo]. Yeh im a bit big,
but im still gonna [grow though].
I shot Monk, but keep it on the [low though].
Cnt let my [folks know]. Mum dnt approve,
cos my lifes like great big a [Soap Show].
Fucked up, thats why i still smoke [Dope Bro].

Got a Cold Heart, wnt give the last [Rolo].
Mite see me in the Benz, not a [Polo]
or a Volvo. Mans gotta ride [Sho Sho].
Dnt fuck around cos im not on [Jokes Bro].
I happy slap [Homo's]. Bust out the [Mobile].
Ram the Camera in ur Face, take a [Photo].
Im Skinny, but I Merk [Grown Blokes] and
I dnt give a fuck about the [Po-Po].


NEXT 16 BARZ RHYMING SOUND:[UM/UN-?AH]

M - C - K, I mite roll widda [Pumpers].
Nike Air Trackies and Eckowear [Jumpers].
I shot a little Green, got bare [Punters].
Get attention from the Gally, but I
won't touch [Munters]. And I hate [Fronters],
Hit you widda Punch that could break
[Bus Bumpers]. Im quick wen I Spit
like a Rabbit, but my names not [Thumper].

Get ruud, then Bruv im gonna [Thump ya].
Brae's in my Endz used to call me
the [Clumper], so im gonna av to
[Clump ya]. Cnt put it any [Blunter].
Mite get the Taser, mite just [Stun ya].
Ima [Hunter], so im comin wid the Shank
to wrap u up after I [Lump ya].
More Evil, than that man in the [Stunt Car].

I could do better than this, but I tried to make it clearer this time Badman ok.

Safe



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 06/07/08 05:43AM by MCK.

MCK that drop was aite.. you are definitely the best newbie we've seen here... however dont always assonance rhyme. mix it up... do internal rhymes assonance, repetetive try evrything the more rhymes you include the more people you gonna have goin

FUCK THAT GUY CAN RHYME!!!

anywayz nice drop man

MCK !!! that drop was overly sik ill write sum barzzz bk l8er ye ?

im a new generation
no long ting no combonation
i spit venom like nathan
slip a shank in his ribz with no hesitation
and again
im a new generation
no long ting no combonation
i spit venom like nathan
slip a shank in his ribz with no hesitation
hit me bk ye kool

MCK, them bars wer 2 ill!! nicely done.

Tempa ur drops rnt too bad either but id say u need t be bit more creative, make em bit longer aswel coz cnt really say mch bout em.
stay kl both u
x


*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

MCK
TEMPA FOLLW ON JOKE TING:
4 BARZ REPEATED TWICE

Ur a New Generation, Im the new General.
My Barz will Merk urs Tempa, in General.
So Generally that means that u will fall.
Different Genre to you cos im not a fall.

and again

Ur a New Generation, Im the new General.
My Barz will Merk urs Tempa, in General.
So Generally that means that u will Fall.
Different Genre to you cos im not a Fall.


Just something I wrote based on urs tempa lol, not meant to be serious.

Oh Yeh and cheers for comments guys and RAD :), Ill write a serious drop soon as this is just joke ting.

Safe.



Edited 1 times. Last edit at 06/09/08 07:15AM by MCK.

MCK Wrote:
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> Ite then here is sumfing:
>
> MCK
> ME DUB
> 64 BARZ
> ----------------------------------------------
>
>
> FIRST 16 BARZ RHYMING SOUND:
>
> Ima a white boy, But im dark like .
> Blud M-C-K, yeh thats my
> Man spits . Yeh im a bit big,
> but im still gonna .
> I shot Monk, but keep it on the .
> Cnt let my . Mum dnt approve,
> cos my lifes like great big a .
> Fucked up, thats why i still smoke .
>
> Got a Cold Heart, wnt give the last .
> Mite see me in the Benz, not a
> or a Volvo. Mans gotta ride .
> Dnt fuck around cos im not on .
> I happy slap . Bust out the .
> Ram the Camera in ur Face, take a .
> Im Skinny, but I Merk and
> I dnt give a fuck about the .
>
>
> NEXT 16 BARZ RHYMING SOUND:
>
> M - C - K, I mite roll widda .
> Nike Air Trackies and Eckowear .
> I shot a little Green, got bare .
> Get attention from the Gally, but I
> won't touch . And I hate ,
> Hit you widda Punch that could break
> . Im quick wen I Spit
> like a Rabbit, but my names not .
>
> Get ruud, then Bruv im gonna .
> Brae's in my Endz used to call me
> the , so im gonna av to
> . Cnt put it any .
> Mite get the Taser, mite just .
> Ima , so im comin wid the Shank
> to wrap u up after I .
> More Evil, than that man in the .
>
> I could do better than this, but I tried to make
> it clearer this time Badman ok.
>
> Safe
>
>
>
Sick barz bruv you got a unique stlye but........

I hate feds dat are like stop stop stop
have you got drugs a shank or a glock
im like blud are you smokin bare rock
im young still and im aimin for the top,

My career's like viagra its Never gunna flop
i wont rest till my heart has stopped,
and every wasteman around has failed or dropped,
like a balloon you man will get popped

Na jus jokin bruv i dnt spray innit!!

Ure barz are sick tho still

Bless

dude erm charged your bars are shit... nd dnt bother clashin me cos u will get murdered me and radikulus kinda own this site and radikulus knows bout my mad skills spittin and in bed... so dnt make me make you crry you pussy...

yeh your bars are shit you heard me bitch now run along and spit shit with you dickriding friends in your world of squeaky high voices and get the fuck off this site.