Try spitting to a beat or instrumental tht will help give ur bars timing n improve quality straight away.

as for th content stay away from the usual 'mum' 'girl' disses, they jus make it amateur.

read cjs page on tactical battling n keep practicing.

Expand on ur lyrics, add internal rhymes, lengthen n shorten bars,
just play about with words tbh, musics about expressing urself, u dnt always have to be cussing ppl out to get urself heard.

before i write bars, i immediately say whether its gna be aimed at someone, or is it just general lyrics about me, my life, situations,
if its aimed at someone, look at their name, what bars have they wrote i.e av they said anything stupid lately etc, look for ammo to feed off n write around that.

Hit me up if u need any more advice, im happy t help

stay kl x

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

Radikulus Wrote:
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> Try spitting to a beat or instrumental tht will
> help give ur bars timing n improve quality
> straight away.
>
> as for th content stay away from the usual 'mum'
> 'girl' disses, they jus make it amateur.
>
> read cjs page on tactical battling n keep
> practicing.
>
> Expand on ur lyrics, add internal rhymes, lengthen
> n shorten bars,
> just play about with words tbh, musics about
> expressing urself, u dnt always have to be cussing
> ppl out to get urself heard.
>
> before i write bars, i immediately say whether its
> gna be aimed at someone, or is it just general
> lyrics about me, my life, situations,
> if its aimed at someone, look at their name, what
> bars have they wrote i.e av they said anything
> stupid lately etc, look for ammo to feed off n
> write around that.
>
> Hit me up if u need any more advice, im happy t
> help
>
> stay kl x
>
> *Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

Shit mam diss gyal has got game, wat she said bruv prt from u can say tingz bout mumz cos der funny aslong as you dnt drag on about it!!

DL JME 96 Barz intrumental its a sik beat

Da good mc's are good coz theyve got a lot to say, when ure out doin your fing watch what people do, pay attention to your surroundings and spit about it n it pends on where you liv innit coz like.. if u liv in a cuntry town all you can spt abwt is the post office had no stamps and shit, so the grimier ure endz the grimier your barz!!

Hol tite Bless

Radikulus Wrote:
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> Try spitting to a beat or instrumental tht will
> help give ur bars timing n improve quality
> straight away.
>
> as for th content stay away from the usual 'mum'
> 'girl' disses, they jus make it amateur.
>
> read cjs page on tactical battling n keep
> practicing.
>
> Expand on ur lyrics, add internal rhymes, lengthen
> n shorten bars,
> just play about with words tbh, musics about
> expressing urself, u dnt always have to be cussing
> ppl out to get urself heard.
>
> before i write bars, i immediately say whether its
> gna be aimed at someone, or is it just general
> lyrics about me, my life, situations,
> if its aimed at someone, look at their name, what
> bars have they wrote i.e av they said anything
> stupid lately etc, look for ammo to feed off n
> write around that.
>
> Hit me up if u need any more advice, im happy t
> help
>
> stay kl x
>
> *Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

Shit man diss gyal has got game, wat she said bruv prt from u can say tingz bout mumz cos der funny aslong as you dnt drag on about it!!

DL JME 96 Barz intrumental its a sik beat

Da good mc's are good coz theyve got a lot to say, when ure out doin your fing watch what people do, pay attention to your surroundings and spit about it n it pends on where you liv innit coz like.. if u liv in a cuntry town all you can spt abwt is the post office had no stamps and shit, so the grimier ure endz the grimier your barz!!

Hol tite Bless

lol true, it all depends on ur style, im more of a hip-hop artist so mum disses dnt really work 2 well, grime can us em but like charged said, dont drag on about it.

ye 96 Bars is ill, as is D.Dark- Mission Riddim!
I kinda like Mr.Snowmans- Okay refix, n Ironiks Icey Riddim. but it all depends on wht ur personal styles is i guess.

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

Oh seen UK hip-hop is sum next shit way outta my league i cnt slow my barz dwn if you get me??, K-lash prime example of sick UK Hip-hop artists
Lool dunt like icey riddim its to.....slow for me i prefer dat quicker beat innit!!

U wann hav words wid ure boi C-J hes gettin all pussy wid me coz i merked him and you know it!!

Its gd to see galy r on da grime scene ;-)

Hol tite

lol yeye fairplay, i dnt mind the tempo but i like t be able to really get my point across which is hard t do in Grime, ha i dnt pretend am much gd at it.

i cnt control tht man no more than i cn control th weather lol.
I dno why every1s beefing, we're all here to jus improve n do r thing.

I had a problem with Brewa coz he was tooo disrespectful, serious.

Stay kl tho! i aint even trippin on this lol

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

Structured my Barz a little different to see if its easier to get the flow and shit, but anyway yeh this took me like a few mins so aint the greatest.


Oi SShhh-Hut Ya Mout, Blud dnt say what!/
I dnt do Rap so Fuck Hip-Hop
That cnt come close, Grimes to Hot
Fuck Em, Fuck Snoop, Fuck Big, Fuck Pac
Shank in my left Hand, Right is the Glock
All you man'll get Stabbed get Shot
Boy im far more Grime than Snot./
I Mite buy a Ladder cos im moving to the Top./

Cos im Cold on Par like a Snowman./
Dnt talk about Life, cos u dnt know Man./
Got a big Flow man./
And im not a Little Kid now Mate, ima Grown Man./
U aint got no Gang./
No Boys No Fam./
U aint Wedge like Conan./
Blud I will Puncture ur Chest like a Pen in a Coke Can./

My style can be compared in some aspects to Acid/
My Lyrics aint Placid, more like Poisoneus Gasses/
Ur Tom Thumb, im Massive./
I'll bun u up when I Spark and leave u burned out like Ashes./
Ive owned more Whips than Jesus got Lashes./
And I use to watch Rolldeep at some of their Bashes./
Saw Wiley Cat Mash it./
Boy when im in a Clash then I mite just get Drastic./

Cos Man was dragged up in a Broken Home./
Jammed on the streets out in LeightonStone./
I had White friends, Black friends, Mixed Skintones./
And I made all my money Robbin Mobile Phones./
I use Target the Man walkin on their Jones./
Takin all ur Shit but it aint no Loan./
And if its at ur Drum with ur Girl their, well Blud...../
She mite just get Boned./