New Track- obviously quite hip-hop, called 'Gangster'

If u on a link now u better stand up,
Aint no fucking around now ur times up,
I aint playing, ur telling me to cool it down,
But if a man wanna joust just send him around,
Youse people better act right coz I do what I want to,
Come up in my face, n get eaten like fondue,
Im pontoon in this game coz im an ace n a queen,
Ur blatently green, coz I be chasing the cream,
Gaining a team n up coming, moving a scene,
If youse be hounding at me, then ya minds be out,
When nines come out, burning ima resolve ya doubt,
Cant step to a G without knowing their actions,
So if a bitch mix the beef I flip out wi satisfaction,
Im sanctioning ur squad, coz what u know about Ray,
Middle class citizen but I was born that way,
I done made mistakes n fucked the game as any player out here,
So if ur talking bout backgrounds ima Bust! I make that too clear!
See this a dog eat dog world so I roll with Leads,
Tie up a feen n slit throats n make em kosher meat,
This mixtape made me enemies, they cant stand my gleam,
Im shining too bright, clean, shoot on sight if ur seen. coz

I don’t care if u hating, debating, ima do what I do,
N yall can keep waiting for this bitch to slip, becoz I, I never will,
So let me tell u, U aint th first n u aint the last, bitch, to step my toes,
Coz I been holing for years, caused quite a few tears,
Im th girl to put fear in foes, Coz blud ima,
Gangsterrr, yeah, n u can jus call me that, look fam ima,
Gangsterrr, yeah, n u can take it as fact,
If u cant handle the concept, then death el come at ur door, Coz blud ima
Gangsterr yeah, so what is it u waiting for, come hit me up

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Feedback? what u thinking

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*

pretty sick it needs more too it, a couple more verses a sweet hook and a bridge for the start, get some multi's in there also to boost up ur lyricsism, ur goin places rad, dnt stop using you assonance rhymes and ur multi's and internals that can make and break an artist. IMO u are a female version of Lil Wayne, Not much lyric wise but got the swag and following and potential to be up there among the top, get some multis in you rhymes practice it and rush a Festival or sumthin and start spittin it without beat if a producers there ur bound to get signed up... i'll get a beat at u as soon as i can rad...

orite, thx ceej! yeah does need more to it, thts ony what av got so far, dint take long at all so wa just gonna build up on it n tht.

Thx for th feedback fam, always appreciated
xxx

*Dont fuck about, trust! Girl Got Game*