what i have noticed with ur barz r that they r quiet long :S duno y butit dunt work with a instrumetal lool sooo ppl thets actually make sum barzzz dat fit in the instrumental write da instrmental ur using if ya wnt



ill drop sum barzzz whn ppl start dropin ye ??

kool

they do fam its cause called 'flow' if you got flow you'll make em fit.
Practise makes perfect blud

Tempa you have just pointed out to uself without realising it the reason u aint very good. I can spit grime to rap if i want, its about flow and you obviously dnt have any cuz. But work on it and then you can be good.

Tempa blud let me explain


yooo i roll with a shank
bruv ur barzzz r wank
i put p's in the bank
bruv ur nasty havin a sperm bank

See da way i spit i count the sylabols (not deliberate lyk but jus naturaly = Flow)

If you wanted to make those barz sound better i wudda put

Everyone knows dat i role wid shank
dnt chat cuz ure barz are wank
merked so many man its put p's in da bank
so boy better knw im a lyrical tank (i dint like your sperm bank line coz dats called chattin breeze lol)

See what im gettin at? be more imaginitive wid ure barz yer

before i post let me jus bless this

you tink you can come along n spray like dat
me n ma bois laff when manz act like dat
you shudnt say tingz if you ent like dat
cause we'll take you for a fool n bust dat cap
your jus any breh, your jus any cat
ive got a tempa n you will get clapped
back to reality then lyrically slapped
ill send for your mum n her batty ell get tapped

ok ive tryed spiting them barz 2 a instrumental nd im just off beat man da instrumental is a 16 bar drop ye nd da barz ent long anuff

kool fam hopfully i get my flow sorted out soon

got eney more pointers holla

bessage

More pointers.. na i fink ure blessed fam,
do ure ting but dnt try callin me out ;)

i no lol ill get murkd but i ent been on dis grime ting dat long sooo hopefullyy 1 dai we might clash :P

Lol your kwl man, jus stay tru n dnt chat breeze yer

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Tempa the main rule for flowin is always control the amount of syllables u use.

For example:

I can Bun Bare, Bruv I neva tell lies.
And just like Wiley I ate all the Pies.
Yeh all ur Crews Slewed plus im Fuckin up ur Guys.
Thug life suits me n I'll Strangle u wid Ties.

this is fucked cos of the syllables used, but the following is adapted to work properly by addin/takin-away syllables wen neccesary.

I can Bun Bare, Bruv I neva tell Lies.
And just like Wiley I ate all the Pies.
Leave ur Crew Slewed, Wen Fuckin up ur Guys.
Thug life suits, And I'll Strangle u with Ties.

Can u see how it can easily be adapted to Flow?

Try it bruv and ur find it is bare simple.

nope still struglleing fam i cnt spit 2 fast or 2 slow man its hard